meh.
That was ok, i didnt really notice a plot and all... The graphics were ok, the style was crap, there was little to no violence, and when there was you didnt portray it that well... it was pretty funny i suppose partly becuase of the violence... Try to put gradients, and its a little too skippy. Congradulations on the score however, im surprised its this high! :) good luck on your future submissions, just before you submit anything do a few run throughs and see what your lacking and brush it up... it never hurts to do a checkup once or twice! :)
-Jamie